Have you ever been faced with an emergency medical situation? What did you do?

2020-06-17 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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Before, I had been bleeding from my mouth while I was sleeping. The blood did not stop and I went to the hospital emergency room with my husband. The doctor asked me a few questions and was hospitalized because the blood did not stop after treatment. That day was the day I was receiving gum treatment at the dentist. I remembered drinking aspirin and tea before going to bed. Aspirin was the cause of the blood not stopping. The time I went to the hospital was 3 am, and I had to stay in the hospital for a day until the blood stopped. I had to stay at hospital until the effect of aspirin disappears of remedial result.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name]! That situation sounds scary. I am glad that you are able to stay calm. I hope it doesn\'t happen to you again. Have a peaceful day!~~T.Dee

Before, I had been bleeding from my mouth while I was sleeping.
>>CORRECT!
The blood did not stop and I went to the hospital emergency room with my husband.
>>CORRECT!
The doctor asked me a few questions and was hospitalized because the blood did not stop after treatment.
>>CORRECT!
That day was the day I was receiving gum treatment at the dentist.
>>Earlier on that day, I received a gum treatment from my dentist.
I remembered drinking aspirin and tea before going to bed.
>>CORRECT!
Aspirin was the cause of the blood not stopping.
>>The aspirin was the cause of the continuous flow of the blood.
The time I went to the hospital was 3 am, and I had to stay in the hospital for a day until the blood stopped.
>>CORRECT!
I had to stay at hospital until the effect of aspirin disappears of remedial result.
>>I had to stay at hospital until the effect of aspirin wears off.

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