Have you ever been in a car accident?
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Yes, when I was 6 years old and my sister was 4 years old, a car hit us behind us while we were walking in an apartment complex.
>> Yes, when I was 6 years old and my sister was 4 years old, a car hit us from behind when we were walking in the apartment complex.
I can’t remember exactly. I guess the car was reversing but he didn’t see us because we were so small. At that time my mom was’t there.
>> I can’t remember it exactly. I guess the car was reversing but he didn’t see us because we were so small and at that time my mom was’t there.
She heard that news while she was working. Anyway we were not seriously hurt, we hospitalized.
>> Correct
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>>> She heard that news while at work. Anyway, we were not seriously hurt but we were hospitalized.
One memorable scene is that the nurses couldn’t find my sister’s blood vessels, so they were sticking the needle of IV here and there.
>> Correct
My sister ended up getting a IV on the sole of her foot.
>> Correct
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