Have you ever been lost? When and where? What did you do to find the right direction?
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I was lost when I was in military.
>> I was lost when I was in the military.
I was a military vehicle driver, and also I was a private first class.
>> I was a military vehicle driver and also a private first class officer.
I could not remember all the way of the area of operations.
>> I could not remember the way going to the area of operations.
And thus I got lost in the huge mountains which is located on Dangjin, Korea.
>> Thus, I got lost in the huge mountains, located in Dangjin, Korea.
I reported to my company commander who is in the next seat at that time.
>>CORRECT
Or>> I reported to my company commander who is sitting as the next officer at that time.
And then, he searched the way by using smartphone GPS.
>>CORRECT
It was a very embarrassing situation.
>>It was a very embarrassing experience.
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