Have you ever been moved or inspired by a poem you read or heard?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to read a poem so I often buy poem.
I also give to someone for gift.
Poem is condensed lanuage and relly beatiful.
Of course it is difficult to understand perfectly, but if we read frequently,
I think,we make sense of meaning.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ju Mi! I totally agree with you. Poetry may be hard to understand at first, but that’s what makes it special. Each time we read, we discover new meanings and feelings. Have a great day! ^^
~T. Jewel
I like to read a poem so I often buy poem.
>>I like reading poems, so I often buy poetry books.
I also give to someone for gift.
I also give to someone for gift.
>>I also give them to someone as a gift.
Poem is condensed lanuage and relly beatiful.
Poem is condensed lanuage and relly beatiful.
>>Poetry is a form of condensed language and is really beautiful.
Of course it is difficult to understand perfectly, but if we read frequently, I think,we make sense of meaning.
Of course it is difficult to understand perfectly, but if we read frequently, I think,we make sense of meaning.
>>Of course, it’s difficult to understand perfectly, but if we read frequently, I think we can make sense of the meaning.
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>>Poetry can be hard to understand at first, but the more we read, the more sense it makes.
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