Have you ever been on a sail boat or a row boat?
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Hi Su ^^
I have been on both of them.
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I took a sail boat when I was a teenager and I could take a row boat when after I grew up.
>>> I tried a sail boat when I was a teenager and I tried a row boat when I was growing up.
The both experiences were with my family.
>>> I experienced both with my family.
My aunt payed the fee, so that I could take sail boat.
>>> My aunt paid for the fee so I could take the sail boat.
We fished on the sail boat and ate sashimi.
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It was super delicious.
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When I take a row boat, (it was exactly gondola), I was in Venice.
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Slightly shaking the body of boat and special mood in rainy day.
>>> The boat was slightly shaking and it was rainy.
It was very amazing and memorable.
>>> It was an amazing and memorable.
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