Have you ever been on a sailboat or a rowboat?
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Hello Jenna!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I have been on a sailboat.
>> I have been on a sailboat before.
When I was 14 I went field trip in school.
>> When I was 14, I went on a school field trip.
There I was on a sailboat for leisure.
>> I went on a sailboat for leisure.
I went fast on the sailboat. So I felt little bit scared. But it made me exicited and cool.
>> The sailboat went fast so I felt a little bit scared, but it made me feel excited and cool.
At that time something that I have in my head was gone away.
>> At that time, something was in my head but I forgot about it.
That feeling was so great.
>> CORRECT!
Now thinking I want to experience it again.
>> Now thinking about it, I want to experience it again.
Often I feel this feeling when wind is strong.
>> I often feel this feeling whenever the wind is blowing strongly.
But this is not in ocean or river.
>> But the wind is not from the ocean or the river.
I want to feel it in the ocean or river.
>> I want to feel it by the ocean or river.
Only there wind can go through my physical and mental mind.
>> Only the wind can go through me physically and through my mental mind.
So I like winding weather.
>> So I like a windy weather.
I think today I don\'t have any word in my head.
>> I think I don\'t have any more words to say.
So that\'s it. Thank you.
>> So that\'s all, thank you.
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