Have you ever been outside your comfort zone? Please tell me a bit about it.
학생이 쓴 원문
I often do it.
Because if I am going to hangout with my friends, then I need to go out from my zone.
I can find a lot of entertainments and other stuffs in there.
Because of this reason, my friends also love the place outside of their comfort zone.
That\'s why I often go out of my zone if I am going to hangout with my friends.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thanks for the composition today. And yes, I agree. It\'s also good to get out of our comfort zone sometimes. See you in our next class! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
Because if I am going to hangout with my friends, then I need to go out from my zone.
Because if I am going to hangout with my friends, then I need to go out from my zone.
>>Because if I am going to hang out with my friends, then I need to go out of my zone.
I can find a lot of entertainments and other stuffs in there.
I can find a lot of entertainments and other stuffs in there.
>>I can find a lot of entertainment and other stuff in there.
Because of this reason, my friends also love the place outside of their comfort zone.
Because of this reason, my friends also love the place outside of their comfort zone.
>>CORRECT!
That\'s why I often go out of my zone if I am going to hangout with my friends.
That\'s why I often go out of my zone if I am going to hangout with my friends.
>>That\'s why I often go out of my zone when I hang out with my friends.
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