Have you ever been stranded in a snowstorm? What did you do?
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Sir [이름]!
Happy hump day!
We finished the two first days of this week.
Hang on there until Friday.
Oh my god! I am sure that the parents were really problematic at that time.
Did you stay on the road that night?
I can\'t imagine if I were in your situation.
Good thing, you were able to surpass it.
Thanks for sharing this story today.
Can\'t wait to have a class with you.
Teacher Nina
It was a long time ago when I was literally stranded on the road due to the heavy snowfall.
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>> OR: It was a long time ago when I was literally stranded on the road due to the heavy snow.
When I departed my house to go to my hometown before a New Year’s Day, the weather was okay.
>> When I departed my house to go to my hometown before New Year\'s Day, the weather was okay.
When I was driving for an hour, it started snowing and the snowfall got worse and intensified all of a sudden.
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At first, snow melted down and disappeared right after it touched down the ground, but it began piling up soon.
>> At first, the snow melted down and disappeared right after it touched the ground, but began piling up soon.
Within an hour after it started snowing, cars on the road could not move at all.
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The road became a huge parking lot.
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I had to burn gas only, staying in the car because there was nothing I can do.
>> I only had to burn gas, stayed in the car because there was nothing I can do.
I think I might have stayed overnight on the road.
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The problem was that I could not turn the engine on continuously because if I ran out of gas, I had to walk for several hours to get to the gas station.
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It was freezing with the heating system off in the car.
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Food was also problematic.
>> Food was also a problem.
Although I prepared some snacks, it was not enough.
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It was durable for adults, but infants suffered a lot.
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