Have you ever been stuck in traffic and had to change your plans? What did you do?
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when I go to part time job, I take a bus. But somedays it\'s bad trafffic, i take a subway.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Na [이름]! That’s a clear way to explain how you get to work! I like that you mentioned both the bus and subway; it shows flexibility.
~T. Jenna
when I go to part time job, I take a bus.
>> When I go to my part-time job, I take the bus.
But somedays it\'s bad trafffic, i take a subway.
>>But on some days when there is bad traffic, I take the subway.
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Yes, I have been stuck in traffic before. Normally, I take the bus to my part-time job, but when the traffic is really bad, I change my plan and take the subway instead. It’s faster and helps me arrive on time.
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