Have you ever been to a famous beach? Is pollution a problem in the beaches in Korea?

Hi Sir [이름]!

Wow! Your ideas are really great!

I really appreciate your effort for sharing your thoughts in writing.

You are right, people are the ones who destroy the beaches.

We should really take good care of our environment.

Can you please name the beaches in Korea, aside from Jeju Island?

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Teacher Nina

I have been to a few famous beaches in Korea. 

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>> OR: I visited few famous beaches in Korea.

Almost all of them are polluted with garbage such as cans, beer and Soju bottles, instant food leftovers, plastic bags, and cigarette butts. 

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Although the beach maintenance offices are cleaning them everyday, the same amount of trash is found next day. 

>> Although the beach maintenance offices are cleaning them everyday, the same amount of trash is found the next day.

People are treating the beaches like trash bins. 

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Garbage is discarded by visitors. 

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>> OR: Garbage is discarded by tourists.

People are allowed to drink on the beaches, which is the main cause of the problem. 

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It is serious enough for us to pay our close attention to do some actions to prevent it.

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>> OR: It is serious enough to pay utmost attention to do some actions to prevent it.

Even many pieces of broken glass bottles are found on the beaches, which can hurt visitors.

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When we damage our beaches, we are putting our own well-being at risk.

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This pollution also has huge costs for our taxpayers and the local governments that must clean this trash off of beaches and streets to protect public health.

>> This pollution also has huge costs for our taxpayers and the local governments that must clean this trash off of beaches and streets to protect public\'s health.

We all need to do our fair share to stop this pollution.

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Individuals need to recycle and never litter.

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