Have you ever been to a party? Write about it.
학생이 쓴 원문
I have been to a baby\'s first birthday party and my aunt\'s wedding cermony.
I usally have a party with my family when I become class president.
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Have you ever been to a party? Write about it.
I have been to a baby\'s first birthday party and my aunt\'s wedding ceremony.
>> OR: I have attended a baby\'s first birthday party and my aunt\'s wedding.
I usally have a party with my family when I become class president.
>> And I usually have a party with my family when I become class president.
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