Have you ever been to Australia? If yes, how was your trip? If no, would you ever visit and why?
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Actually, I didn\'t visit Australia. but, I visited New Zealand for study. when I studied in New Zealand, My English was not that bad. but That time was 3 years ago. I think it\'s important steady study for speaking English. so My goal is to be fluent English with teacher! See you Next week.:)
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Hello there, Tony. Thank you again for doing your homework. Awesome job! ~ T. Jane
Actually, I didn\'t visit Australia. but, I visited New Zealand for study.
>>> Actually, I haven\'t visited Australia yet but I went to New Zealand to study.
OR >>> Actually, I haven\'t visited Australia yet but I stayed in New Zealand for some time to study.
when I studied in New Zealand, My English was not that bad. but That time was 3 years ago.
>>> When I studied there, my English skills got better but that was 3 years ago.
I think it\'s important steady study for speaking English.
>>> I think it\'s important to study and practice speaking English regularly.
so My goal is to be fluent English with teacher!
>>> So my goal is to be fluent in English with Teacher.
See you Next week.:)
>>> CORRECT!
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