Have you ever bought something and then never really used it? What was it and why didn't you use it?
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Although I am not the person who likes shopping or is into impulse shopping, I think I have something that I have bought and then used often. When we go shopping, we can buy a thing that was not on our shopping list because it is cheap or looks good. When you actually wear or use it at home, you can see the real value of it and put it away because it is not durable, of bad quality, or doesn’t look good on you. There are cases as well that you cannot check at the shop whether it fits the purpose of your purchase. I once bought a keyed door knob for my room because the existing one was not a knob, but a lever, which was quite inconvenient to operate. I believed the door knob I bought would fit without any trouble, but I failed to install it because its size and depth were too big. I thought about returning it but couldn’t because I have already torn the package.When you buy electronic goods or home appliance, you should be careful before purchase because once you open it, it's period.
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Happy Thursday again, Sir [이름]!
Thank you very much for your composition.
I definitely agree with all of the things that you said below.
I often buy things that are not on my list that leads me not to have money.
I do have a lot of questions for you about this topic. See you in class.
Teacher Nina
Although I am not the person who likes shopping or is into impulse shopping, I think I have something that I have bought and then used often.
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When we go shopping, we can buy a thing that was not on our shopping list because it is cheap or looks good.
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When you actually wear or use it at home, you can see the real value of it and put it away because it is not durable, of bad quality, or doesn’t look good on you.
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There are cases as well that you cannot check at the shop whether it fits the purpose of your purchase.
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I once bought a keyed door knob for my room because the existing one was not a knob, but a lever, which was quite inconvenient to operate.
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I believed the door knob I bought would fit without any trouble, but I failed to install it because its size and depth were too big.
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I thought about returning it but couldn’t because I have already torn the package.
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When you buy electronic goods or home appliance, you should be careful before purchase because once you open it, it\'s period.
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