Have you ever cheated on a sports game?
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This also gave an impression of dishonestly in the game, Sir [이름]!
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~Teacher Eunice
Back in the days, I used to play the football with my colleagues in the army.
>>> Back in the days, I used to play football with my colleagues in the army.
There were rules that junior should not go to the mid line.
>>> There were rules that juniors should not go to the mid line.
Juniors should be the defender and seniors only could be a striker.
>>> Juniors should be the defender and seniors should the striker.
Whenever junior face the senior, junior must not interrupt attack from the senior.
>>> Whenever the juniors face the senior, they mustn\'t interrupt the attack of the seniors.
I think that is the kind of cheating on a sports game.
>>> I think that is a kind of cheating on a sports game.
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