Have you ever cheated on a sports game?

2018-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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Back in the days, I used to play the football with my colleagues in the army. There were rules that junior should not go to the mid line. Juniors should be the defender and seniors only could be a striker. Whenever junior face the senior, junior must not interrupt attack from the senior. I think that is the kind of cheating on a sports game.

강사 첨삭

This also gave an impression of dishonestly in the game, Sir [이름]!

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~Teacher Eunice


Back in the days, I used to play the football with my colleagues in the army.
>>>
Back in the days, I used to play football with my colleagues in the army. 

There were rules that junior should not go to the mid line.

>>> There were rules that juniors should not go to the mid line.

Juniors should be the defender and seniors only could be a striker.

>>> Juniors should be the defender and seniors should the striker.

Whenever junior face the senior, junior must not interrupt attack from the senior. 

>>> Whenever the juniors face the senior, they mustn\'t interrupt the attack of the seniors. 

I think that is the kind of cheating on a sports game.

>>> I think that is a kind of cheating on a sports game. 

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