Have you ever committed a small/ petty crime when you were young?
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When I saw the examples of the question, I felt guilty a little, actually.
Usually, I\'m pretty sure about being a law-abiding citizen except crossing the crosswalk.
At the beginning of doing jaywalk was more than 15 years ago that I was in elementary school student on the way to school.
That time, I got wind of jaywalk is faster than takes a shortcut and it is easy to cross the crosswalk because there are not many cars.
Therefore, I made up my mind to do jaywalk.
I don\'t want to make an excuse for doing jaywalk until now, but the first attempt was really nailed it.
Based on that success, as I started riding a bicycle, I did not follow the signal freely.
Fortunately, I never had a car accident.
I know it is dangerous for drivers and pedestrians both sides of people, but the Korean gene has always in a hurry even the sign is stop.
Maybe it\'s kinds of safety frigidity.
Anyway, It\'s not in my New Year\'s resolution, but I\'ll try to kick the habit that I have had for a long time:)
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Hi there, [이름] Ju!
Since we talked about juvenile delinquency today, I thought I would ask of a question that makes us reminisce our youth as being young, wild, and free ones (YOLO mode). On a serious note, being a minor means that we can be susceptible or vulnerable to commit mistakes. For some, it can be very fatal. So, I appreciate your being honest about jaywalking.
Some youth try to shoplift in a store and do not feel any remorse about it. The others bully the weak as depicted on the K-Drama The Glory. If you have remained law-abiding at this point of your life, there is a great chance that you will be the same all throughout your life.
Here on your work, I see your mastery in vocabulary and idioms as well as your fluency. Study the underscored word or group of words to enhance your grammar even more. You did a wonderful job! Carry on!
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
Usually, I\'m pretty sure about being a law-abiding citizen except crossing the crosswalk.
>> Correct!
At the beginning of doing jaywalk was more than 15 years ago that I was in elementary school student on the way to school.
>> At the beginning of doing jaywalk was more than 15 years ago when I was an elementary school student on the way to school.
That time, I got wind of jaywalk is faster than takes a shortcut and it is easy to cross the crosswalk because there are not many cars.
>> That time, I (got wind/ acquainted/ at home with) of jaywalking as it is faster than taking a shortcut and it is easy to cross the crosswalk because there are not many cars.
Therefore, I made up my mind to do jaywalk.
>> Correct!
Or: Therefore, I made up my mind to jaywalk.
I don\'t want to make an excuse for doing jaywalk until now, but the first attempt was really nailed it.
>> I don\'t want to make an excuse for doing jaywalking until now, but on the first attempt, I really nailed it.
Based on that success, as I started riding a bicycle, I did not follow the signal freely.
Based on that success, as I started riding a bicycle, I did not follow the signal freely.
>> Correct!
Fortunately, I never had a car accident.
>> Correct!
I know it is dangerous for drivers and pedestrians both sides of people, but the Korean gene has always in a hurry even the sign is stop.
>> I know it is dangerous for drivers and pedestrians both sides of people, but the Korean gene is always in a hurry even the sign is stop.
Maybe it\'s kinds of safety frigidity.
Maybe it\'s kinds of safety frigidity.
>> Maybe it\'s a kind of safety frigidity.
Anyway, It\'s not in my New Year\'s resolution, but I\'ll try to kick the habit that I have had for a long time:)
>> Correct!
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