Have you ever confess your mistakes and how did you do it?
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Yes. I have it. This story is when I worked at an amusement park. At that time I was rookie middle manager one of the ride but it was not full time employee, that time I don’t know how to make out a schedule, I was unavoidably asking other people and we worked two shifts.
>> Yes. I had experience to confess my mistake and the story is when I was working in an amusement park, at that time I was a rookie middle manager of one of the rides but I was not a full time employee that time. I don’t know how to manage the time/ scheduling of the rides. I always avoid asking other people and we worked two shifts everyday.
Unfortunately an accident our ride when I was having lunch at cafeteria, I heard the accident news, i hurried over to my workplace, all employee came to our office and they watched our shift schedule, ‘why do you make this shift schedule? we cannot follow two shift, you don’t know this work process?, tell me why did you do that’ one of employee said angry, I tried to explain all of things and I tell the truth. As things it turned out they already knew everything.
>> Unfortunately, there was an accident of one of our rides when I was having lunch at the cafeteria, I heard the accident on the news, I was hurried to go to my workplace and all the employees came to our office and they watched our shift schedule, And the manager said that \"Why did you make this kind of schedule? You can\'t have two shifts every day, you don’t know this kind of process?, tell me why did you do that?\" he was really angry that time. I tried to explained all of things and I tell the truth and they already knew why we need to that.
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