Have you ever cried in public and embarrassed yourself? Have you ever cried for no reason and felt g

2019-12-18 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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I haven\'t cried in public but I have embarrassed myself. When I was 13 years old, I fell down in the school library. I was very embarrassed, but fortunately I didn\'t cry. I haven\'t cried for no reason but I have cried over a trifle. For example, when I was 8 years old, I cried while having a little argument with my friend.

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Hello Julia! :)

Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)

- Tricia

I haven\'t cried in public but I have embarrassed myself.
>> CORRECT!

When I was 13 years old, I fell down in the school library.
>> CORRECT!

I was very embarrassed, but fortunately I didn\'t cry.
>> CORRECT!

I haven\'t cried for no reason but I have cried over a trifle.
>> CORRECT!

For example, when I was 8 years old, I cried while having a little argument with my friend.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> For example, when I was 8 years old, I cried while having a petty argument with my friend.

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