Have you ever dialed a wrong number?
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I have ever dialed a wrong number.
I should have checked the number pf phone in advance.
When I realized that I had dialed the wrong number, I was very embarrssed.
So immediatly I apologized th the other person and hang up.
When I took the wrong call, I felt bad that he or she hung up without apologizing,
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Have you ever dialed a wrong number?
I have ever dialed a wrong number.
>>I have dialed a wrong number before.
I should have checked the number pf phone in advance.
I should have checked the number pf phone in advance.
>>I should have checked the number of the phone in advance.
When I realized that I had dialed the wrong number, I was very embarrassed.
When I realized that I had dialed the wrong number, I was very embarrassed.
CORRECT!
or>>When I found out that I dialed the wrong number, I was so embarrassed.
So immediatly I apologized th the other person and hang up.
So immediatly I apologized th the other person and hang up.
>>So, I immediately apologized to the other person and hung up.
When I took a wrong call, I felt bad that he or she hung up without apologizing,
When I took a wrong call, I felt bad that he or she hung up without apologizing,
CORRECT!
or>>When I received a wrong call, I felt sorry for the person when he or she hung up without apologizing,
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