Have you ever done something unusual in life?(ANSWER)

I had dissected squid. I dissecrted it at a gifted class. I used knife, tweezers to dissected it. I picked eyes, and I found a lens. The crystalline lens was very hard and it was clear like a jewels. And I took out it's ink pocket. Fortunately, I didn't made a mistake. After it's over, we eat ramen with squid that I dissected. (It was so delicious!!!) Thank you for reading! By. [이름]

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

Have you ever done something unusual in life? Please answer in details. 

 

YOUR ANSWER:

I had dissected squid.
I dissecrted it at a gifted class.
I used knife, tweezers to dissected it.
I picked eyes, and I found a lens.
The crystalline lens was very hard and it was clear like a jewels.
And I took out it\'s ink pocket.
Fortunately, I didn\'t made a mistake.
After it\'s over, we eat ramen with squid that I dissected.
(It was so delicious!!!)

 

CORRECTIONS:

I had dissected squid.
I dissected it at a gifted class.
I used knife, tweezers to dissect it.
I picked the eyes, and I found a lens.
The crystalline lens was very hard and it was clear like a jewels.
I took out its ink pocket.
Fortunately, I didn\'t make a mistake.
After it\'s over, we ate ramen with the squid that I dissected.
(It was so delicious!!!)

 

** Dear [이름], wow, I’m speechless!  Did you just say, you ate the same squid that you dissected at school? I’m really wondering now. I will ask more about it on Monday. ^^ Anyway, please take note of the corrections in your homework. Thank you. ^^

 

Speak with you on Monday. J

 

   ---------T. Alexia----------