Have you ever dreamt about something that later came true?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young, I had ever a strang dream.
In my dream, my grandmother was about to cross the river. She said to me - do you want to go with me?.
I said to her ‘no’.
Then, she crossed the river.
When I woke up in the morning, I felt very bad feeling. However, a few days later she passed away.
I often dream a strang dreams.
But I try not to care of my dream.
It is likely to be anxious my life if I depend on my dreams.
And I don’t even like dreaming.
Because it makes me very tired.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름] [이름]. Thank you for sharing your dream. Have you heard of \"premonitions\"? I don\'t know, but sometimes dream can be a way for us to see something in the future. It happened to me too. Anyway, I hope you\'ll stay well ~
Aki :)
When I was young, I had ever a strang dream.
>>> When I was young, I had a strange dream.
In my dream, my grandmother was about to cross the river. She said to me - do you want to go with me?.
I said to her ‘no’.
>>> I saw in my dream that my grandmother is about to cross the river and asked me if I want to go with her, but I answered her \"no\'
Then, she crossed the river.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> Then she kept going.
When I woke up in the morning, I felt very bad feeling. However, a few days later she passed away.
>>> When I woke up in the morning, I had a very bad feeling. and a few days later she passed away.
I often dream a strang dreams.\'
>>> I often dream strange dreams.\'
But I try not to care of my dream.
>>> But I try not to care about my dream.
It is likely to be anxious my life if I depend on my dreams.
>> It makes m anxious if I depend on my life on dreams.
And I don’t even like dreaming.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> As much as possible, I don\'t like dreaming.
Because it makes me very tired.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It makes me tired the following day.
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