Have you ever dreamt about something that later came true?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I have one. I dremt about entering to the popular university. There are some universities that famous and high level in Korea. I was wondering about campus life and I wanted to be a proud daughter to my parents. However, I failed to the test and interview when I was 19 years old. Inevitably, I entered a university that I had never thought about. Therefore I couldn\'t enjoy a campus life and felt depressed. In order to give up regret, I studied for the test while I studied my major in the university at the same time in my second year of university. Fortunately I was able to enter the university that I wanted a year later. I think I was lucky.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, [이름]! Thank you for sharing your experience! It’s inspiring to see how you turned a setback into an opportunity. Your determination to study hard and pursue your dreams is commendable. I’m glad you achieved your goal of entering the university you wanted.
~T. Jenna
Yes, I have one. I dremt about entering to the popular university.
>>Yes, I have one. I dreamt about entering the popular university.
OR
>>Yes, I have one. I envisioned myself gaining admission to a prestigious university.
There are some universities that famous and high level in Korea.
>>There are some universities that are famous and of a high level in Korea.
OR
>>Several universities in Korea are renowned and esteemed for their high academic standards.
I was wondering about campus life and I wanted to be a proud daughter to my parents.
>>I was wondering about campus life and wanted to make my parents proud.
However, I failed to the test and interview when I was 19 years old.
>>However, I failed the test and the interview when I was 19 years old.
OR
>>However, I flunked the test and the interview when I was 19.
Inevitably, I entered a university that I had never thought about.
Correct, or
>>Inevitably, I enrolled in a university that I had never considered.
Therefore, I couldn\'t enjoy a campus life and felt depressed.
Correct, or
>>As a result, I couldn\'t make the most of campus life and ended up fee[이름]g down.
In order to give up regret, I studied for the test while I studied my major in the university at the same time in my second year of university.
>>To overcome my regrets, I studied for the test while studying / pursuing my major in my second year at university.
Fortunately I was able to enter the university that I wanted a year later.
Correct, or
>>Fortunately, I gained admission to my desired university a year later.
I think I was lucky.
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>>I consider myself fortunate.
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