Have you ever eaten something that made you ill?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Rachel!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
Oh.... Yes, I have.
>> Oh yes, I have.
It was last year in period of the final test in summer.
>> It was last year during the period of the final test in summer.
The day, I was listening my school classes to Internet.
>> That day, I was listening to my school classes on the internet.
In lunch time, I wanted to eat hamburger in lotteria.
>> At lunchtime, I wanted to eat a hamburger in Lotteria.
So I requested my mom to buy that. And.... the result was Food poisning.
>> So I requested my mom to buy that and the result was food poisoning.
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