Have you ever eaten something that made you ill?

2022-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Oh.... Yes, I have. It was last year in period of the final test in summer. The day, I was listening my school classes to Internet. In lunch time, I wanted to eat hamburger in lotteria. So I requested my mom to buy that. And.... the result was Food poisning.

강사 첨삭

Hello Rachel!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


Oh.... Yes, I have.

>> Oh yes, I have.

It was last year in period of the final test in summer. 

>> It was last year during the period of the final test in summer. 

The day, I was listening my school classes to Internet. 

>> That day, I was listening to my school classes on the internet. 

In lunch time, I wanted to eat hamburger in lotteria. 

>> At lunchtime, I wanted to eat a hamburger in Lotteria. 

So I requested my mom to buy that. And.... the result was Food poisning.

>> So I requested my mom to buy that and the result was food poisoning.

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