Have you ever eaten something that you thought you wouldn't like, but found out that you actually li

2018-12-05 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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When I was young, I thought I don't like raw fish. But at last week, I went to sushi restaurant with my parents. And, I ate raw fish. I was surprised. "How delicious the raw fish is!!" Since then, I've become fond of raw fish.:) -END-

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

 

 

Have you ever eaten something that you thought you wouldn\'t like, but found out that you actually liked it?

Please answer in complete sentences.

 

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

When I was young, I thought I don\'t like raw fish.
But at last week, I went to sushi restaurant with my parents.
And, I ate raw fish. I was surprised. \"How delicious the raw fish is!!\"
Since then, I\'ve become fond of raw fish.:)

 

CORRECTIONS:

When I was young, I thought I don\'t like raw fish.
But last week,
when I went to a sushi restaurant with my parents, I ate raw fish. And, I was surprised how delicious the raw fish is!!
Since then, I
became fond of raw fish. :)

 

 

 

 





 

** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. J  Please take note of the corrections. ^^

See you in our class. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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