Have you ever experienced a shortage of something?
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course I have it.
For example, I want to eat some foods, but It is sold out when I need it.
And we live in the shortage world.
Goods always lack, especially that I want.
So we have to allocate efficiently of limited goods.
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Hi George!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
~Kelly^^
Of course I have it.>> Correct
For example, I want to eat some foods, but It is sold out when I need it.
>> For example, I want to eat some food, but they are sold out when I am craving them.
And we live in the shortage world.
For example, I want to eat some foods, but It is sold out when I need it.
>> For example, I want to eat some food, but they are sold out when I am craving them.
And we live in the shortage world.
>> We live in a world where there is scarcity.
Goods always lack, especially that I want.
Goods always lack, especially that I want.
>> Good are always lacking especially what I want.
So we have to allocate efficiently of limited goods.
So we have to allocate efficiently of limited goods.
>> So I have to allocate my limited goods efficiently.
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