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I\'ve had an experience.
When it was my last year at school, I posted an important report to my supervisor.
I was on my way home from work after posting the report, but when I got a call from my supervisor, he got angry that the important document was wrong.
I was embarrassed and didn\'t know what to do, but as soon as I got to work tomorrow, I checked the documents and replied that I would process them first and give them to you again, and as soon as I got to work, I checked the documents as I promised.
As it turned out, I filled in the important figures of the documents incorrectly, as soon as I checked, I made the documents again and submitted them to my supervisor.
As I submitted, I told my supervisor, \"I filled in the wrong numbers. I\'m so sorry. But I\'m glad you checked again and found my mistake, and I was able to prevent any big errors. Thank you.\"
That\'s when I realized that anyone can make a mistake, and if they do, it\'s important to acknowledge and apologize quickly.
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Hi, [이름]. You handled the situation very well. I love your mindset about owning up to one\'s mistakes and responsibilities in order to not make the problem a bigger issue. I love it. Well done, [이름]! Thanks for this as well. Have a great day! :)
~T. Jade^^
I\'ve had an experience.
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When it was my last year at school, I posted an important report to my supervisor.
When it was my last year at school, I posted an important report to my supervisor.
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>> OR: During my last year at school, I submitted an important report to my supervisor.
I was on my way home from work after posting the report, but when I got a call from my supervisor, he got angry that the important document was wrong.
>> OR: During my last year at school, I submitted an important report to my supervisor.
I was on my way home from work after posting the report, but when I got a call from my supervisor, he got angry that the important document was wrong.
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>> While I was on my way home from work after submitting the report, I received a call from my supervisor. He was upset because the important document contained errors.
I was embarrassed and didn\'t know what to do, but as soon as I got to work tomorrow, I checked the documents and replied that I would process them first and give them to you again, and as soon as I got to work, I checked the documents as I promised.
I was embarrassed and didn\'t know what to do, but as soon as I got to work tomorrow, I checked the documents and replied that I would process them first and give them to you again, and as soon as I got to work, I checked the documents as I promised.
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>> OR: Feeling embarrassed and unsure of what to do, the next day when I arrived at work, I promptly reviewed the documents. I assured my supervisor that I would reprocess and resubmit them. I fulfilled my promise and rechecked the documents upon reaching the office.
As it turned out, I filled in the important figures of the documents incorrectly, as soon as I checked, I made the documents again and submitted them to my supervisor.
>> OR: Feeling embarrassed and unsure of what to do, the next day when I arrived at work, I promptly reviewed the documents. I assured my supervisor that I would reprocess and resubmit them. I fulfilled my promise and rechecked the documents upon reaching the office.
As it turned out, I filled in the important figures of the documents incorrectly, as soon as I checked, I made the documents again and submitted them to my supervisor.
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>> OR: Upon reexamination, I realized that I had entered the crucial figures incorrectly. Consequently, I remade the documents and promptly resubmitted them to my supervisor.
As I submitted, I told my supervisor, \"I filled in the wrong numbers. I\'m so sorry. But I\'m glad you checked again and found my mistake, and I was able to prevent any big errors. Thank you.\"
>> OR: Upon reexamination, I realized that I had entered the crucial figures incorrectly. Consequently, I remade the documents and promptly resubmitted them to my supervisor.
As I submitted, I told my supervisor, \"I filled in the wrong numbers. I\'m so sorry. But I\'m glad you checked again and found my mistake, and I was able to prevent any big errors. Thank you.\"
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>> OR: Upon submission, I informed my supervisor, \"I entered the wrong numbers. I apologize for the error. I appreciate your reevaluation, which enabled me to rectify my mistake and prevent any significant errors. Thank you.\"
>> OR: Upon submission, I informed my supervisor, \"I entered the wrong numbers. I apologize for the error. I appreciate your reevaluation, which enabled me to rectify my mistake and prevent any significant errors. Thank you.\"
That\'s when I realized that anyone can make a mistake, and if they do, it\'s important to acknowledge and apologize quickly.
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