Have you ever experienced an earthquake?

2020-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Joylin

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No.I have never experienced an earthquake. Korea is safe an earthquake bettter than other countries. So I just experieced fire station. Fire stations always protect dangerous situation already. They were teaching us, If you are dangerous situation, what should we do. 17 years ago, I did train earthquake situation. but it\'s not an earthquake.It\'s fake.

강사 첨삭

Great Day, JO!
Thank you for being so diligent in doing your homework. Always review the corrections and I am looking forward to seeing you progress!
Good luck, JO!
HERE ARE THE CORRECTIONS.
No. I have never experienced an earthquake.
>> Correct!
Korea is safe an earthquake bettter than other countries.
>> Korea is safe from earthquakes better than other countries.
So I just experieced fire station.
>> So, I just experienced being in a fire station.
Fire stations always protect dangerous situation already.
>> Fire firefighters always protect people from dangerous situation.
They were teaching us,
>> They were teaching us.
If you are dangerous situation, what should we do.
>> If you are in a dangerous situation, what should you do?
17 years ago, I did train earthquake situation.
>> 17 years ago, I did training on what to do in earthquake situations.
but it\'s not an earthquake.It\'s fake.
>> But it\'s not for earthquakes. It\'s fake.

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