Have you ever experienced an earthquake?
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Hello Jay!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
Frankly, I\'ve never felt an earthquake in my whole life.
>> Frankly speaking, I\'ve never felt an earthquake in my whole life.
I know it happened sometimes in Korea as well and lots of my friends have experienced it.
>> I know it happens sometimes in Korea as well and lots of my friends have experienced it.
Even though I lived same city with them, I really didn\'t feel any earthquakes.
>> Even though I lived in the same city with them, I really didn\'t feel any earthquakes.
If I hadn\'t slept deeply, I would have experienced earthquake.
>> If I hadn\'t slept deeply, I would have experienced the earthquakes.
Fortunately, we have not too strong it usually. but, we should prepare about that disaster for our life.
>> Fortunately, it\'s not usually too strong.
but, we should prepare about that disaster for our life.
>> But we should prepare for this disaster for our lives.
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