Have you ever experienced culture shock while traveling?
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Of course, I have experienced that culture shock a lot while I was on a trip to [이름]gapore. First, when I passed around fruit shop , it smelled Durian. At that time, I realized that it\'s a Durian at a time although I\'ve never smelled before. I still remember it smells stinky like rotten eggs. Second, when I did smoke, I saw people who smoked through the filter. I didn\'t understand and thought \"Don\'t people have a time to smoke?\". But, I understood when I stopped by a convenient store to buy a cigarette. It\'s 16 dollars!? You know? there is only 4 dollars in my country. It\'s more expensive than 4 times!!
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Of course, I have experienced that culture shock a lot while I was on a trip to [이름]gapore.
>> CORRECT!First, when I passed around fruit shop , it smelled Durian.
>> First, when I passed around the fruit shop, it smelled Durian.
At that time, I realized that it\'s a Durian at a time although I\'ve never smelled before.
>> At that time, I realized that it\'s a Durian although I\'ve never it smelled before.
I still remember it smells stinky like rotten eggs.
>> CORRECT!OR >> I still remember it stinks like rotten eggs. Second, when I did smoke, I saw people who smoked through the filter.
>> CORRECT!I didn\'t understand and thought \"Don\'t people have a time to smoke?\".
>> CORRECT!But, I understood when I stopped by a convenient store to buy a cigarette.
>> CORRECT!It\'s 16 dollars!?
>> CORRECT!You know? there is only 4 dollars in my country.
>> You know, that\'s only 4 dollars in my country.
It\'s more expensive than 4 times!!
>> CORRECT!
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