Have you ever experienced discrimination on a personal level?
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Hello there Sir [이름].
A great day to you. ^^
Thank you for sharing your experiences with me.
I felt bad after reading about what happened at transit lounge.
I admire you for being so strong.
I hope that you are having a great time.
See you in class.
Teacher Nina
When I served in the military, I worked with American soldiers.
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I don’t remember exactly what happened.
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However, one of the American soldiers cursed at me one day like “shit Asian” when I was tying my shoes at the hallway of barracks.
>> However, one of the American soldiers cursed me one day like “shit Asian” when I was tying my shoes at the hallway of the barracks.
I think I didn’t do anything that provoked him to say it to me.
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I felt absurd and was perplexed.
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Another time when I felt discriminated was when I traveled to Latin American countries on business.
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My flight had to be transferred in Vancouver in the States.
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I didn’t have a US visa at that time.
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During the transit in Vancouver, I was escorted by a US Immigration security official/guard right after getting out of the flight.
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At the transit lounge, the guard stood close to me and watched even every second.
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When I went to the restroom, he even followed me and didn’t leave me alone.
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I was so embarrassed and got upset, although I couldn’t resist.
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I felt like I was treated as a criminal.
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Not many countries are adopting such polices for transit customers.
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