Have you ever experienced discrimination on a personal level

2019-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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No, I really haven\'t experienced any type of discrimination. Well, that\'s because there were not any reasons to discriminate me. I am same korean just like any other classmates, and I\'ve never bullied by other classmates, and I hadn\'t any kind of phycial handicap. Well, I am not saying that those have any kind of handicap, races, or sexual identities, or weakness deserve discrimination. But you know there are like, typical repatoire that every haters have. Apparantly, I was never caught in their discrimination radar. On the other hand,however, I think that those who hate someone also have their own fractures in their mind, which is really a pity for them. They can\'t really bare their own scars, so they solve it wrong way. The way that hurts somebody else who is weaker than them. So if I got discriminated by someone, then I would embrace his or her trace of scar, and I will pray for their mental health, them to move on. That would be much more easier and mature.

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- Teacher Tricia



No, I really haven\'t experienced any type of discrimination.

>> No, I really haven\'t experienced any type of discriminations.


Well, that\'s because there were not any reasons to discriminate me.

>> CORRECT!


I am same korean just like any other classmates, and I\'ve never bullied by other classmates, and I hadn\'t any kind of phycial handicap.

>> I am the same with any other classmates, and I\'ve never bullied by other classmates, and I don\'t have any kind of phycial handicap.


Well, I am not saying that those have any kind of handicap, races, or sexual identities, or weakness deserve discrimination.

>> CORRECT!


But you know there are like, typical repatoire that every haters have.

>> But you know there are like, typical repertoire that every haters have.


Apparantly, I was never caught in their discrimination radar.

>> Apparently, I was never caught in their discrimination radar.


On the other hand, however, I think that those who hate someone also have their own fractures in their mind, which is really a pity for them.

>> CORRECT!


They can\'t really bare their own scars, so they solve it wrong way.

>> They can\'t really bare their own scars, so they solve it in a wrong way.


The way that hurts somebody else who is weaker than them.

>> CORRECT!


So if I got discriminated by someone, then I would embrace his or her trace of scar, and I will pray for their mental health, them to move on.

>> So if I got discriminated by someone, then I would embrace his or her trace of scar, and I will pray for their mental health, for them to move on.


That would be much more easier and mature.

>> That would be much easier and mature.

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