Have you ever experienced discrimination on a personal level
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No, I really haven\'t experienced any type of discrimination.
>> No, I really haven\'t experienced any type of discriminations.
Well, that\'s because there were not any reasons to discriminate me.
>> CORRECT!
I am same korean just like any other classmates, and I\'ve never bullied by other classmates, and I hadn\'t any kind of phycial handicap.
>> I am the same with any other classmates, and I\'ve never bullied by other classmates, and I don\'t have any kind of phycial handicap.
Well, I am not saying that those have any kind of handicap, races, or sexual identities, or weakness deserve discrimination.
>> CORRECT!
But you know there are like, typical repatoire that every haters have.
>> But you know there are like, typical repertoire that every haters have.
Apparantly, I was never caught in their discrimination radar.
>> Apparently, I was never caught in their discrimination radar.
On the other hand, however, I think that those who hate someone also have their own fractures in their mind, which is really a pity for them.
>> CORRECT!
They can\'t really bare their own scars, so they solve it wrong way.
>> They can\'t really bare their own scars, so they solve it in a wrong way.
The way that hurts somebody else who is weaker than them.
>> CORRECT!
So if I got discriminated by someone, then I would embrace his or her trace of scar, and I will pray for their mental health, them to move on.
>> So if I got discriminated by someone, then I would embrace his or her trace of scar, and I will pray for their mental health, for them to move on.
That would be much more easier and mature.
>> That would be much easier and mature.
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