Have you ever experienced discrimination on a personal level? Answer in 5 sentences or more.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I have been very lucky not to experience any discrimination on a personal level so far.
When it comes to discrimination, it brings me my old, good memory in Tunis when I worked as a dispatcher from my previous company.
I was only foreigner at the office and my co-workers at my team always helped me not to get discriminated from others.
Living as a foreigner and working as a dispatcher is not easy thing however I had a great time there with my family.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Good job on your composition!
You express your thoughts really well.
From what I can see, your challenges are articles and prepositions.
We can work on those in the coming days.
I look forward to more of your work.^^
~ Teacher Sharon
I think I have been very lucky not to experience any discrimination on a personal level so far.
>> I think I have been very lucky not to have experienced any discrimination on a personal level so far.
When it comes to discrimination, it brings me my old, good memory in Tunis when I worked as a dispatcher from my previous company.
When it comes to discrimination, it brings me my old, good memory in Tunis when I worked as a dispatcher from my previous company.
>> When it comes to discrimination, it brings me my old, good memory in Tunis when I worked as a dispatcher for my previous company.
I was only foreigner at the office and my co-workers at my team always helped me not to get discriminated from others.
I was only foreigner at the office and my co-workers at my team always helped me not to get discriminated from others.
>> I was only a foreigner at the office and the co-workers in my team always helped me to not get discriminated against by others.
Living as a foreigner and working as a dispatcher is not easy thing however I had a great time there with my family.
Living as a foreigner and working as a dispatcher is not easy thing however I had a great time there with my family.
>> Living as a foreigner and working as a dispatcher were not easy, however, I had a great time there with my family.
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