Have you ever experienced having a bad dream?
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Yes I had a nightmare.
It\'s a bee nightmare.
At the dream, first, I touch the beehive.
Second, then the bees came out to the beehive.
Lastly, the bees shot very many times.
Then, I screamed, family all wouk up.
These are I ever experienced haved a nightmare.
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Yes I had a nightmare.
>> CORRECT!
It\'s a bee nightmare.
It\'s a bee nightmare.
>> It\'s a nightmare about bees.
At the dream, first, I touch the beehive.
>> In my dream, I first touched the beehive.
Second, then the bees came out to the beehive.
>> Second, the bees came out of the beehive.
OR >> And then, the bees came out of the beehive.
Lastly, the bees shot very many times.
>> Lastly, the bees stung me many times.
Then, I screamed, family all wouk up.
>> Then, I screamed, that made all of my family members wake up.
These are I ever experienced haved a nightmare.
>> This was the nightmare I have experienced.
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