Have you ever felt discrimination from other people before? How should we deal with it?
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, I\'ve never felt discrimination from other people before.
But, if we feel discrimination from other people, I think we have to tell them that discrimination is a bad thing.
If everybody doesn\'t tell that discrimination is a bad thing, people will discriminate other people more and more.
So, what we have to do is tell other people about the bad things of discrimination, and we have to express our emotion clearly.
And I think the most important thing that we have to get is confidence.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]:)
At some point in our lives, we can feel discrimination from other people but there is always a good way to properly handle it. These things should not affect us in a negative way but let it be something positive that can motivate us to become better people.
Actually, I\'ve never felt discrimination from other people before.
>> CORRECT
But, if we feel discrimination from other people, I think we have to tell them that discrimination is a bad thing.
>> But if I do someday, I will tell them that is is a bad thing.
If everybody doesn\'t tell that discrimination is a bad thing, people will discriminate other people more and more.
>> If no one tells other people that discrimination is a bad thing, then it will continue more and more.
So, what we have to do is tell other people about the bad things of discrimination, and we have to express our emotion clearly.
>> So what we have to do it confront them that discriminating another person is a bad thing. We have to express our emotions clearly.
And I think the most important thing that we have to get is confidence.
>> And I think the most important thing is that we have to have a lot of confidence.
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