Have you ever felt it was necessary to lie to protect yourself? Explain.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that sometimes I need to lie to protect myself. For example, if other part asks me personal information ar put in uncomfortable situation, hiding some of them or expression other way can be a method to protect myself. However, it is important to keep lying from becoming a habit. We have to use lying when the situation is neccesary. And if possible, we need to consider to find other way to being honest.
강사 첨삭
You gave a very balanced and thoughtful answer by recognizing that lying can sometimes be necessary, but also emphasizing the importance of honesty. This shows strong moral reasoning and self-awareness. To improve, focus on clearer sentence structure and word choice, especially phrases like “another person,” “prevent from becoming,” and “find ways to be honest.” Overall, your response is mature, logical, and well-explained, great job!
-Teacher Wela
For example, if other part asks me personal information ar put in uncomfortable situation, hiding some of them or expression other way can be a method to protect myself.
>> For example, if another person asks me for personal information or puts me in an uncomfortable situation, hiding some information or expressing myself in a different way can be a method to protect myself.
However, it is important to keep lying from becoming a habit.
>> However, it is important to prevent lying from becoming a habit.
We have to use lying when the situation is neccesary.
>> We should only lie when the situation is necessary.
And if possible, we need to consider to find other way to being honest.
>> And if possible, we should try to find other ways to be honest.
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