Have you ever forgotten an important date, like a birthday or an anniversary?
학생이 쓴 원문
I forgot my wedding day three years ago.
My wife very angly.so i can not talking to my wife
A few days later, I bought a present and give her it
She smiled again
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Tomorrow is our first wedding anniversary.
We didn\'t forget it. ^^ Have a good weekend!
And always remember your anniversary too. ^^
~~Teacher May~~
I forgot my wedding day three years ago.
>> I forgot our wedding anniversary three years ago.
My wife very angly.so i can not talking to my wife
>> My wife was very angry so I could not talk to my wife.
A few days later, I bought a present and give her it
>> A few days later, I gave her a present.
She smiled again.
>> CORRECT
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