Have you ever given someone the wrong information by mistake? What happened?
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I submitted some cost-saving ideas and the estimated savings my boss asked for, but I made a mistake in the calculation and the savings amount ended up being overstated. Because of that, our cost-reduction target for the year became unrealistically high, and we had a really hard time trying to meet it.
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Hi, Jayjay!
Thank you for doing your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I submitted some cost-saving ideas and the estimated savings my boss asked for, but I made a mistake in the calculation and the savings amount ended up being overstated.
>>I submitted some cost-saving ideas along with the estimated savings my boss asked for, but I made a mistake in the calculation, and the savings amount ended up being overstated.
2. Because of that, our cost-reduction target for the year became unrealistically high, and we had a really hard time trying to meet it.
>>CORRECT!
Have a good night!
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