Have you ever had a dream that felt like it was real?-Teacher Vance

I had ever felt my dream was real. Um, actually this was a very unpleasant dream. So, today i explain to you what this dream is about. I was at home with my family.It was 12 o'clock and was getting ready for bed as usual. Then suddenly, the light was out. And when I looked outside, all the lights were on except my house. Then, suddenly I heard the front door beating. So when I looked outside, nobody was there. It was really creepy. So while I was getting ready to go to bed again, all but my house suddenly went out at the same time, strangely. Then suddenly the front door was gone. And outside the door was a murder coming in. I shut the door behind me in my room. Oh, my God. The murderer tore off my door with an electric saw. So a second before I died, my eyes opened. I woke up, confirmed that my family was all right, and breathed out a sigh of relief. Then, suddenly I heard a knock on the door again... Thank you for reading my essay!!

I had ever felt my dream was real. Um, actually this was a very unpleasant dream. So, today i explain to you what this dream is about.

>>I had ever felt my dream was real. Um, actually this was a very unpleasant dream. So, today I will explain this to you what this dream is about.

 I was at home with my family.It was 12 o\'clock and was getting ready for bed as usual. Then suddenly, the light was out.

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 And when I looked outside, all the lights were on except my house. Then, suddenly I heard the front door beating.

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 So when I looked outside, nobody was there. It was really creepy.

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So while I was getting ready to go to bed again, all but my house suddenly went out at the same time, strangely.

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 Then suddenly the front door was gone. And outside the door was a murder coming in.

>> Then suddenly the front door was gone. And outside the door was a murderer coming in.

 I shut the door behind me in my room. Oh, my God.

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The murderer tore off my door with an electric saw.

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 So a second before I died, my eyes opened.

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 I woke up, confirmed that my family was all right, and breathed out a sigh of relief.

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Then, suddenly I heard a knock on the door again...

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