Have you ever had a dream that seemed impossible?
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Yes. And now I got the dream that seemed impossible. Let me explain That is mean. When I was single before the marriage, I want to marriage with ture love. But It\'s look like very difficult for me. Because I don\'t have confidence to looking for perpect partner. Before met my wife, I already experiece of dating with several women. They are very good womens except me. We are not good talker and listener to eachother.
So, I praied to jesus, \'Please, I want to marriage, I want to meet perpect partner like share one\'s life. But, If jesus think It\'s not time to marriage, I understanding your choice. And I consertrate on you.\'
So, I was finding the big church to consertrate jesus and to sharing the story of jesus with my life. And I moved the church recomended by my freind. And so, finally I met my wife.
Important is when we consertrate on jesus, we can reiceve everything that I needed.
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Thank you, Steve, for putting in the effort on the homework and providing such a thorough and detailed answer. I\'m pleased to see you pushing your limits and contributing your ideas.
~~Teacher Ryka^^
Yes. And now I got the dream that seemed impossible.
>> Yes, and now I have achieved a dream that once seemed impossible.
Let me explain That is mean.
>> Let me explain what I mean.
When I was single before the marriage, I want to marriage with ture love.
>> Before I got married, I dreamed of marrying my true love.
But It\'s look like very difficult for me. Because I don\'t have confidence to looking for perpect partner.
>> However, it seemed very difficult because I lacked the confidence to find the perfect partner.
Before met my wife, I already experiece of dating with several women.
>> Before meeting my wife, I had dated several women.
They are very good womens except me. We are not good talker and listener to eachother.
>> They were wonderful women, but we struggled to communicate effectively with each other.
So, I praied to jesus, \'Please, I want to marriage, I want to meet perpect partner like share one\'s life.
>> So, I prayed to Jesus, saying, \"Please, I want to get married and meet the perfect partner to share my life with.
But, If jesus think It\'s not time to marriage, I understanding your choice. And I consertrate on you.\'
>> But if Jesus thinks it\'s not the right time, I will understand your choice and focus on you.\"
So, I was finding the big church to consertrate jesus and to sharing the story of jesus with my life.
>> I then sought a large church where I could concentrate on Jesus and share his story with my life.
And I moved the church recomended by my freind. And so, finally I met my wife.
>> A friend recommended a church, and it was there that I finally met my wife.
Important is when we consertrate on jesus, we can reiceve everything that I needed.
>> The important lesson is that when we focus on Jesus, we can receive everything we need.
>> Yes, and now I have achieved a dream that once seemed impossible.
Let me explain That is mean.
>> Let me explain what I mean.
When I was single before the marriage, I want to marriage with ture love.
>> Before I got married, I dreamed of marrying my true love.
But It\'s look like very difficult for me. Because I don\'t have confidence to looking for perpect partner.
>> However, it seemed very difficult because I lacked the confidence to find the perfect partner.
Before met my wife, I already experiece of dating with several women.
>> Before meeting my wife, I had dated several women.
They are very good womens except me. We are not good talker and listener to eachother.
>> They were wonderful women, but we struggled to communicate effectively with each other.
So, I praied to jesus, \'Please, I want to marriage, I want to meet perpect partner like share one\'s life.
>> So, I prayed to Jesus, saying, \"Please, I want to get married and meet the perfect partner to share my life with.
But, If jesus think It\'s not time to marriage, I understanding your choice. And I consertrate on you.\'
>> But if Jesus thinks it\'s not the right time, I will understand your choice and focus on you.\"
So, I was finding the big church to consertrate jesus and to sharing the story of jesus with my life.
>> I then sought a large church where I could concentrate on Jesus and share his story with my life.
And I moved the church recomended by my freind. And so, finally I met my wife.
>> A friend recommended a church, and it was there that I finally met my wife.
Important is when we consertrate on jesus, we can reiceve everything that I needed.
>> The important lesson is that when we focus on Jesus, we can receive everything we need.
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