Have you ever had a dream that seemed impossible?
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My dream was to be a prosecutor. The Korean curriculum offers two options: liberal arts and science. The prosecutor is in the liberal arts, but I came to the science when I didn\'t know about it. so i was give up my dream
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My dream was to be a prosecutor.
>> My dream was to become a prosecutor.
The Korean curriculum offers two options: liberal arts and science.
>> CORRECT
OR >> The Korean curriculum provides two tracks: liberal arts and science.
The prosecutor is in the liberal arts, but I came to the science when I didn\'t know about it. so i was give up my dream
>> The path to becoming a prosecutor is through the liberal arts track, but I chose the science track because I wasn\'t aware of this. As a result, I gave up on my dream.
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