Have you ever had a dream that seemed impossible?

2024-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Ryka

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I\'m a realistic person. so, I\'ve set a goal making possible. However I dreamt a impossible dream, such as winning a lottery. I even set a plan after winning a lottery.

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Hi there! It’s great to see you completed the homework. You shared your ideas beautifully—keep up the amazing work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


I\'m a realistic person. so, I\'ve set a goal making possible.
>> I\'m a realistic person, so I\'ve set goals that are achievable. 

However I dreamt a impossible dream, such as winning a lottery.
>> However, I also dream of impossible things, like winning the lottery.

I even set a plan after winning a lottery.
>> I’ve even made plans for what I would do if I won.

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