Have you ever had a dream which seemed to come true? What happened?
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Yes,I have I ever had a dream which seemed to come true. When I was 12 years old, I wanted to get a polaroid camera for Christmas, so my parents bought me a polaroid camera for Christmas.
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~ Teacher Tricia
Yes,I have I ever had a dream which seemed to come true.
>>> Yes, I have ever had a dream which seemed to come true.
When I was 12 years old, I wanted to get a polaroid camera for Christmas, so my parents bought me a polaroid camera for Christmas.
>>> CORRECT!
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