Have you ever had a dream which seemed to come true? What happened?

2016-05-04 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Before I started studying to take a Certified Public Accountant exam, becoming a CPA was just a dream. I couldn’t imagine myself getting a CPA license. We all have many wishes and dreams to do, want, become something. They could seem mere dreams that could be unrealistic and not achievable at first glance. However, we can make our dreams come true. The initial step to realize our dreams is to start something. If we don’t initiate now out of fear that they are not achievable, we will never get there. A good beginning is half the battle. Well begun is half done. Don’t be pushed by our problems; be led by our dreams. Stop dwelling on “what ifs.” Once you started, never give up. Even if we kicked them out of the way because someone told us they were impossible, they are still our dreams. Think back and remember the dreams we once had, whether it was to go to college or to become a doctor. Our dreams have never truly gone away. If we work hard enough, we achieve our goals.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Sir [이름]!

Happy Tuesday. ^^

You are really an inspiration to me.

You teach me a lot of things.

I totally agree with you. We should not give up.
We should always believe that we can reach our goals.

See you in class. Have a great day.

Teacher Nina


Before I started studying to take a Certified Public Accountant exam, becoming a CPA was just a dream.

>> Before I started studying for the Certified Public Accountant exam, becoming a CPA was just a dream.

I couldn’t imagine myself getting a CPA license.

>> correct

We all have many wishes and dreams to do, want, become something.

>> correct

They could seem mere dreams that could be unrealistic and not achievable at first glance.

>> correct

However, we can make our dreams come true.

>> correct

The initial step to realize our dreams is to start something.

>> correct

If we don’t initiate now out of fear that they are not achievable, we will never get there.

>> correct

A good beginning is half the battle.

>> correct

Well begun is half done. 

>> correct

Don’t be pushed by our problems; be led by our dreams.

>> correct

Stop dwelling on “what ifs.”

>> correct

Once you started, never give up.

>> correct

Even if we kicked them out of the way because someone told us they were impossible, they are still our dreams.

>> correct

Think back and remember the dreams we once had, whether it was to go to college or to become a doctor.

>> correct

Our dreams have never truly gone away.

>> correct

If we work hard enough, we achieve our goals.

>> correct

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