Have you ever had a great conversation with a complete stranger?

2018-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Regine

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Yes. For learning English, I sometimes went to Meet up which is an app for meeting of people who have the same interests. On New Year’s Eve, I went the Meet up in Canada, and I met this guy who had sparkling emerald eyes. At the meeting, we spoke almost for 2hours and he walked me at the bus stop. We exchanged our number and started dating. But soon, after several meetings, I realized he was still immature and he just is a boy who wants to look mature. So I broke up with him. We only dated for a month but I realized again if you want to meet somebody you should spend quite long time to get to know each other even though you might feel connected at first.

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~~~Teacher Regine


Have you ever had a great conversation with a complete stranger?


Yes. For learning English, I sometimes went to Meet up which is an app for meeting of people who have the same interests.

>> Yes, I had a great conversation with a complete stranger, I have an experience talking to other people with the same interest using a mobile app.

On New Year’s Eve, I went the Meet up in Canada, and I met this guy who had sparkling emerald eyes.

>> During New Year’s Eve,  I met this guy with sparkling emerald eyes in Canada.

At the meeting, we spoke almost for 2hours and he walked me at the bus stop.

>> We had a great conversation for almost 2hours  and he walked me to the bus stop.

We exchanged our number and started dating.

>> We exchanged numbers and  then we started dating.

But soon, after several meetings, I realized he was still immature and he just is a boy who wants to look mature.

>> But after several times of getting to know each other I realized that his still an immature  boy who want to look matured.

So I broke up with him. We only dated for a month but I realized again if you want to meet somebody you should spend quite long time to get to know each other even though you might feel connected at first.

>> So I broke up with him. We only dated for a month but I realized that if you want to know somebody you should spend quite long time to get to know each other even though you felt a weird connection on your first meet up.

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