Have you ever had a great conversation with a complete stranger?
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강사 첨삭
I\'ll talk to you in class.
~~~Teacher Regine
Have you ever had a great conversation with a complete stranger?
Yes. For learning English, I sometimes went to Meet up which is an app for meeting of people who have the same interests.
>> Yes, I had a great conversation with a complete stranger, I have an experience talking to other people with the same interest using a mobile app.
On New Year’s Eve, I went the Meet up in Canada, and I met this guy who had sparkling emerald eyes.
>> During New Year’s Eve, I met this guy with sparkling emerald eyes in Canada.
At the meeting, we spoke almost for 2hours and he walked me at the bus stop.
>> We had a great conversation for almost 2hours and he walked me to the bus stop.
We exchanged our number and started dating.
>> We exchanged numbers and then we started dating.
But soon, after several meetings, I realized he was still immature and he just is a boy who wants to look mature.
>> But after several times of getting to know each other I realized that his still an immature boy who want to look matured.
So I broke up with him. We only dated for a month but I realized again if you want to meet somebody you should spend quite long time to get to know each other even though you might feel connected at first.
>> So I broke up with him. We only dated for a month but I realized that if you want to know somebody you should spend quite long time to get to know each other even though you felt a weird connection on your first meet up.
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