Have you ever had a great conversation with a complete stranger?

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Hello, Today I will explained to you that have I ever had a great conversation with a complete stranger.

>>Hello, Today I will explain to you, that I had a great conversation with a complete stranger.

Actually, I can had a great conversation with a complete stranger except an unofficial conversation.

>>Actually, I can have a great conversation with a complete stranger except for an unofficial conversation.

Um...I\'m very shy to conversation with stranger, But If I become friendly with them, And I become a very talkable.

>>Um...I\'m very shy to have a conversation with stranger, But If I become friendly with them, I become very talkative.

I scared of the male stranger. Because I saw the news about male stranger kill or hit the kids. I think It is very horrible things. So, I scared of the male stranger

>>I am scared of male strangers. Because I saw the news about a male stranger that kills or hits the kids. I think it is a very horrible thing. So, I am scared of male strangers.

 Second, I like to make a new friend.

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 Many people who live in near my house say I am very good at make a new friend.

>> Many people who live  near my house say, I am very good at making a new friend.

Because I like to make friend.

>>CORRECT

How about become friend with me? I think It can be very funny!

>>CORRECT