Have you ever had a risky or dangerous job? If so, please describe it. If not, would you be willing
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Have you ever had a risky or dangerous job? If so, please describe it. If not, would you be willing to?
=> I didn\'t have a risky or dangerous job before, and I don\'t want to work in risky or dagerous environment.
However, if you let me look for one, working as a nursing maybe sometimes face a risky situtation, such as be attacked by patients or the patient\'s family members, because they are sometimes become so sensitive and aggrasive infront of the illness. But in other hand, I think in hospital there are more risky or dangerous situation for the patients than for the medical team.
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Hi there Ms. [Name] :)
I don\'t wish for a risky or a dangerous job myself. I think people who work in the medical world are often in danger because they have to save lives every time.
One wrong move will be over :(
Have you ever had a risky or dangerous job? If so, please describe it. If not, would you be willing to?
I didn\'t have a risky or dangerous job before, and I don\'t want to work in risky or dagerous environment.
>>I\'ve never done anything dangerous before, and I don\'t want to work in a risky or a dangerous environment.
However, if you let me look for one, working as a nursing maybe sometimes face a risky situtation, such as be attacked by patients or the patient\'s family members, because they are sometimes become so sensitive and aggrasive infront of the illness.
>>However, working as a nurse can sometimes lead to dangerous situations. For example, they are attacked by patients or their families. Because they are sometimes very sensitive and annoying.
But in other hand, I think in hospital there are more risky or dangerous situation for the patients than for the medical team.
>>But on the other hand, I think there are more dangerous situations in the hospital for patients than for the medical team.
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