Have you ever had a very bad nightmare? What was it about?(ANSWER)
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HOMEWORK:
Have you ever had a very bad nightmare? What was it about?
Please answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
I
had a very bad nightmare at last year.
It was midnight.
I was walking through the jungle alone.
I used a flashlight to see infront.
After a few minutes ago, flashlight has no battery.
Then, something moved very fast infront of me.
It was very big and very smelly.
And somethings were surrounding me!
So I shout, and I woke up..
It was my first, and also last nightmare.
WOOOOOOOOOOOO!
I\'m scary now!
.
.
CORRECTIONS:
I had a very bad nightmare last year.
It was midnight.
I was walking through the jungle alone.
I used a flashlight to see in front.
After a few minutes, the
flashlight has no battery.
Then, something moved very fast in front of me.
It was very big and very smelly.
And some things were surrounding me!
So, I shouted and I woke up.
It was my first and also last nightmare.
WOOOOOOOOOOOO!
I\'m scared now!
** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^
Cheers!! Take care. J
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