Have you ever had a very bad nightmare? What was it about?(ANSWER)

2019-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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I had a very bad nightmare at last year. It was midnight. I was walking through the jungle alone. I used a flashlight to see infront. After a few minutes ago, flashlight has no battery. Then, something moved very fast infront of me. It was very big and very smelly. And somethings were surrounding me! So I shout, and I woke up.. It was my first, and also last nightmare. WOOOOOOOOOOOO! I'm scary now!

강사 첨삭

  

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

 

Have you ever had a very bad nightmare? What was it about?

Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

I had a very bad nightmare at last year.
It was midnight.
I was walking through the jungle alone.
I used a flashlight to see infront.
After a few minutes ago, flashlight has no battery.
Then, something moved very fast infront of me.
It was very big and very smelly.
And somethings were surrounding me!
So I shout, and I woke up..
It was my first, and also last nightmare.
WOOOOOOOOOOOO!
I\'m scary now!

 

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CORRECTIONS:

 

I had a very bad nightmare last year.
It was midnight.
I was walking through the jungle alone.
I used a flashlight to see
in front.
After a few
minutes, the flashlight has no battery.
Then, something moved very fast
in front of me.
It was very big and very smelly.
And
some things were surrounding me!
So
, I shouted and I woke up.
It was my
first and also last nightmare.
WOOOOOOOOOOOO!
I\'m
scared now!



 

 

** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊  Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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