Have you ever had an experience where you met a person for the first time but you don\'t like him/he
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course, I did sometimes because firstly, If I can tell she/he bosses around people, or use bad words or swears.
And also sometimes, I can tell if that person is rude or mean with her/his face.
For example, if she/he kept on looking at you like you are a monkey or something, we can tell that she/he is rude.
So it\'s important to give a first good impression. :)
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Have you ever had an experience where you met a person for the first time but you don\'t like him/her?
Of course, I did sometimes because firstly, If I can tell she/he bosses around people, or use bad words or swears.
>>> Of course, I have tried it before. I can tell it if she/he bosses around people, use bad words or swears, then I\'ll never like her/him.
And also sometimes, I can tell if that person is rude or mean with her/his face.
>>> And sometimes, I can tell if that person is rude and mean by just looking at her/his face.
For example, if she/he kept on looking at you like you are a monkey or something, then we can tell that she/he is rude.
>>> CORRECT
So it\'s important to give a first good impression.
>>> So it\'s important to give/leave a good first impression.
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