Have you ever had any bad experiences with fire?
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Fortunately, no I haven\'t have any experience with fire. Thanks god. It is common that fire usually starts small spark such as the tip of cigarette. I had small accidents caused by cigarette. It happened outside of my class. I went out for smocking during break time and then went back to the class. Suddenly, I could smell burning something but I didn\'t know where it came from. After few minutes, I found out that my pants had been burnt due to cigarette tip. There were hole on my pants, fortunately, I didn\'t hurt any part of my body. I haven\'t seen big fire face to face except the scene on TV. I heard that someone who save their life from the fire have suffered from pain whose nobody can endure. It can be natural disaster but we can prevent it by getting training frequently.
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Fortunately, no I haven\'t have any experience with fire.
>> Fortunately, I don\'t have any experiences with fire.
Thanks god.
>> Thank God that I didn\'t experience it.
It is common that fire usually starts small spark such as the tip of cigarette.
>> It is common that fire usually starts with a small spark such as the tip of a cigarette.
I had small accidents caused by cigarette.
>> I had small accidents caused by a cigarette.
It happened outside of my class.
>> CORRECT!
I went out for smocking during break time and then went back to the class.
I went out for smocking during break time and then went back to the class.
>> I went out to smoke during my break time and then went back to the class.
OR >> I went our for a smoke on my break time and went back to class after that.
Suddenly, I could smell burning something but I didn\'t know where it came from.
>> Suddenly, I could smell something burning but I didn\'t know where it came from.
After few minutes, I found out that my pants had been burnt due to cigarette tip.
>> After a few minutes, I found out that my pants had been burnt due to the cigarette\'s tip.
There were hole on my pants, fortunately, I didn\'t hurt any part of my body.
>> There was a hole on my pants, fortunately, I didn\'t hurt any part of my body.
I haven\'t seen big fire face to face except the scene on TV.
>> I haven\'t seen a big fire face to face except the scenes on TV.
OR >> I haven\'t seen a big fire personally except from what I see on TV.
I heard that someone who save their life from the fire have suffered from pain whose nobody can endure.
>> I heard that someone who saves other people\'s lives from the fire have suffered from pain that nobody can endure.
It can be natural disaster but we can prevent it by getting training frequently.
>> It can be a natural disaster but we can prevent it by getting trainings frequently.
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