Have you ever had any problems sleeping?
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When i lei down on the bed, I always fall a sleep within 5minutes.
That\'s really merit to me. It\'s because there are a lot of peoples that can\'t fall a sleep well.
So some people take a medicine for going to sleep early.
But Sometimes falling a sleep well is not good to me. Every after dinner, I need to take my mental from food coma.
If i i lei on the bed or sofa, I can\'t wake up on my self. I would falling a sleep right away.
For that reason, sometimes i couldn\'t attend my English class.
So not to fall asleep, I found a way. Drinking coffee helps me to reduce my sleepy.
But Drinking coffee every night is not good to healthy because of caffein. But there is no choice. I think that is only way to me.
There is no problem while sleeping, only falling asleep well is my problem.
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Hi, Joon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille
When i lei down on the bed, I always fall a sleep within 5 minutes.
>> When I lie down on the bed, I always fall a sleep within 5 minutes.
That\'s really a merit to me.
>> CORRECT!
It\'s because there are a lot of peoples that can\'t fall a sleep well.
>> It\'s because there are a lot of people that can\'t fall asleep easily.
OR >> It\'s because there are a lot of people that can\'t sleep well.
So some people take a medicine for going to sleep early.
>> So some people take a medicine for them to sleep early.
But sometimes falling a sleep well is not good to me.
>> But sometimes falling asleep easily is not good for me.
Every after dinner, I need to take my mental from food coma.
>> Every after dinner, I need to take my mind out of food coma.
If i i lei on the bed or sofa, I can\'t wake up on my self.
>> If I lie on the bed or sofa, I can\'t wake myself up.
I would falling a sleep right away.
>> I would fall asleep right away.
For that reason, sometimes I couldn\'t attend my English class.
>> CORRECT!
So not to fall asleep, I found a way. >> CORRECT!
Drinking coffee helps me to reduce my sleepy.
>> Drinking coffee helps me stay awake.
But Drinking coffee every night is not good to healthy because of caffein.
>> But drinking coffee every night is not good for the health because of caffeine.
But there is no choice.
>> CORRECT!
I think that is only way to me.
>> I think that is the only way.
There is no problem while sleeping, only falling asleep well is my problem.
>> CORRECT!
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