Have you ever had any problems sleeping?
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I\'ve had problems sleeping when i was in a high school. It was a boarding school, so i shared the room with 3 other roommates.
When i was in the second grade of the high school, one of my roommates liked to talk with others until late at night before going to bed. I think it was one of the ways for her to release her stress by talking with her friends before bed.
The problem, however, is that i am a slight sleeper so couldn\'t get to sleep until everybody goes to bed.
Hence, i get very tired after few weeks of having lack of sleep. In the end, I changed my mind and decided to adapt my sleeping pattern to my roomate. It was still inevitable for me to be awakened until the conversation ends, so i just got into the conversation and didn\'t go to bed until everybody gets tired. Eventually, it made me less stressful because i didn\'t need to intentially go to bed early. Also, i could get close to my friends more emotionally after having lots of conversation.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ye Ji! It\'s amazing how you get to make changes for other people easily. I am proud of you because not everyone are willing to make sacrifices. In the end end it worked well for you and not only for your friends. Great outcome! ~~T.Dee
I\'ve had problems sleeping when i was in a high school.
>>I\'ve had problems sleeping when I was in high school.
It was a boarding school, so i shared the room with 3 other roommates.
>>It was a boarding school, so I shared the room with 3 other roommates.
When i was in the second grade of the high school, one of my roommates liked to talk with others until late at night before going to bed.
>>When I was in the second grade of the high school, one of my roommates liked to talk with others until late at night before going to bed.
I think it was one of the ways for her to release her stress by talking with her friends before bed.
>>I think it was one of the ways for her to release her stress.
The problem, however, is that i am a slight sleeper so couldn\'t get to sleep until everybody goes to bed.
>>The problem, however, is that I am a light sleeper so couldn\'t get to sleep until everybody goes to bed.
Hence, i get very tired after few weeks of having lack of sleep.
>>Hence, I got very tired after a few weeks of having lack of sleep.
In the end, I changed my mind and decided to adapt my sleeping pattern to my roomate.
>>In the end, I changed my mind and decided to adapt my sleeping pattern to my roommate\'s habits.
It was still inevitable for me to be awakened until the conversation ends, so i just got into the conversation and didn\'t go to bed until everybody gets tired.
>>It was still inevitable for me to be awakened until the conversation ends, so I just got into the conversation and didn\'t go to bed until everybody gets tired.
Eventually, it made me less stressful because i didn\'t need to intentially go to bed early.
>> Eventually, it made me less stressful because I didn\'t need to intentionally go to bed early.
Also, I could get close to my friends more emotionally after having lots of conversation.
>>Also, I could get close to my friends more after having lots of conversation.
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